Hi Moses Mphatso, sorry it’s taken me a while to respond.

You’ve written an interesting and powerful article! I think it deserves many more claps than it has received.

May I offer a suggestion? If you spent a few minutes adding some formatting, breaking apart many of the much-too-long paragraphs, using H1 and H2 headers to help the reader, this post would really POP!

If this is something you want to do, take a look at my post that you commented on. Note what I have done and do similar formatting to your post. Essentially you want to guide the reader’s eye so it’s easy for them to want to read all the way to the end.

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